I am a student at Yaldhurst Model School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Rhy, my name is Kaedun from St.Bernadette's school Hornby and I would like to say wow you made the house and I thought that was creative and quite stylish I went inside the disco and there was a Dj. I think you need to make it not zoom down fast I know you can't do it but the start made me laugh because of the starting big picture also I think you need to make that picture a little smaller and you shouldn't make there be 200 and something slides if you only need at least 68 lines but anyway that was creative of you making the house and also your tree. Hope to see more of your work later on. :D
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Hi Rhy, my name is Kaedun from St.Bernadette's school Hornby and I would like to say wow you made the house and I thought that was creative and quite stylish I went inside the disco and there was a Dj. I think you need to make it not zoom down fast I know you can't do it but the start made me laugh because of the starting big picture also I think you need to make that picture a little smaller and you shouldn't make there be 200 and something slides if you only need at least 68 lines but anyway that was creative of you making the house and also your tree. Hope to see more of your work later on. :D
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